GO GO GO
Let The Beauty Flow
ordered the heaven
and here comes the snow
ice ice everywhere
not a sliver to waste
look at the earth smling
after having its wonderful taste
The feel of the snow was so pure
so virgin
no chance of any impurity
any margin
Fallin directly from the heaven's heaven
blowing the tempest of all the desires that are craven
giving a tough time to all philosophical mavens
thinking how can sthing be so calm and so even
the vista was so light so poise so ascetic
that has surely made all the evils feel pathetic
it felt like these featherweight cotton balls asking newton ,with all the fire on
"where the heck is gravity you idiot you moron ?
what if the the whole world is believing you and going into gloom
i will remove every ounce of it with a white and light broom"
the feel in the hand was so soft so fluffy
even the cutest of the teddy of ur girlfriend feel scruffy
falling snow snowballing the blanket snow
making the vista so enthralling to enlarge any falling brow
so that the tight bow of the sight arrow
craves for more and more flow
My first experience with snow
It was just like a fairy tale
in which a fairy holding a holy grail
descends on earth wearing a pure white bridal gown
to bring a smile on every frown....:)
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hamare kavi sahab ne virgin aur margin mein jo rhyming scheme utpann karne ki koshish ki hai...woh atyant hriday-vidarak hai :D
ReplyDelete''so enthralling so enriching so pure so idyllic
so awesome so astral so gaily so seraphic
so empyrean so whitish and so much beatif''
Seems like bpl k TIME mein beth kar 2 ghante ki vocab ki class attend kar li ho ..WTF lol :D
sahi keh raha hai dost thoda jyada ho gaya
ReplyDeleteyou are a good critic ...possibly i could edit it
aapki is layatmak badhta ka bakhan karna mushkil hai..ye sirf nimak wali bai hi kar sakti hai..
ReplyDeletevery well written ........... hiddden talent sprouting :)
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