Thursday, February 11, 2010

MY FIRST SNOWFALL OF LIFE

GO GO GO
Let The Beauty Flow
ordered the heaven
and here comes the snow

ice ice everywhere
not a sliver to waste
look at the earth smling
after having its wonderful taste

The feel of the snow was so pure
so virgin
no chance of any impurity
any margin

Fallin directly from the heaven's heaven
blowing the tempest of all the desires that are craven
giving a tough time to all philosophical mavens
thinking how can sthing be so calm and so even

the vista was so light so poise so ascetic
that has surely made all the evils feel pathetic

it felt like these featherweight cotton balls asking newton ,with all the fire on
"where the heck is gravity you idiot you moron ?
what if the the whole world is believing you and going into gloom
i will remove every ounce of it with a white and light broom"

the feel in the hand was so soft so fluffy
even the cutest of the teddy of ur girlfriend feel scruffy

falling snow snowballing the blanket snow
making the vista so enthralling to enlarge any falling brow
so that the tight bow of the sight arrow
craves for more and more flow

My first experience with snow
It was just like a fairy tale
in which a fairy holding a holy grail
descends on earth wearing a pure white bridal gown
to bring a smile on every frown....:)

4 comments:

  1. hamare kavi sahab ne virgin aur margin mein jo rhyming scheme utpann karne ki koshish ki hai...woh atyant hriday-vidarak hai :D


    ''so enthralling so enriching so pure so idyllic
    so awesome so astral so gaily so seraphic
    so empyrean so whitish and so much beatif''

    Seems like bpl k TIME mein beth kar 2 ghante ki vocab ki class attend kar li ho ..WTF lol :D

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  2. sahi keh raha hai dost thoda jyada ho gaya
    you are a good critic ...possibly i could edit it

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  3. aapki is layatmak badhta ka bakhan karna mushkil hai..ye sirf nimak wali bai hi kar sakti hai..

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  4. very well written ........... hiddden talent sprouting :)

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